I am a Year 8 student at Saint Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my teachers are Mrs Tui and Mrs Lauchlan.
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Friday, 11 August 2017
Writing - Lights Out
Lights Out by Aaliyah
This is a Story about me. A girl who is left in the dark and conquers her fear.
Hi Aliyah my name is Helam I like your story about lights out I like your photo on lights out next time can you put your writing in so people can see it. blog you later
Hi Aaliyah My name is Lara from Papakura central school. I like your writing it's really interesting but maybe you could proof read your writing and fix your mistakes. Keep it up! You could be a great author when you grow up
Hi Aliyah my name is Helam I like your story about lights out I like your photo on lights out next time can you put your writing in so people can see it. blog you later
ReplyDeleteHi Aaliyah
ReplyDeleteMy name is Lara from Papakura central school. I like your writing it's really interesting but maybe you could proof read your writing and fix your mistakes.
Keep it up! You could be a great author when you grow up