I am a Year 8 student at Saint Pius X Catholic School in Auckland, NZ. I am in the SPX Nu'u Learning Space and my teachers are Mrs Tui and Mrs Lauchlan.
Hey Aaliyah,You have done a wonderful post. I really enjoyed how you explained how convenient and beautiful God has created the tree. Keep up the great work!Katelyn : )
Talofa lava Aaliyah,I like the way you wrote about the tree because it was as if the tree was a person. I really think that your writing is amazing.Maybe some more adjectives would be helpful!Mikaela
Good work Aaliyah. I like how you used rhetorical question then proceed to describe how the tree makes you feel about God. Keep it up. 👍
Hey Aaliyah,
ReplyDeleteYou have done a wonderful post. I really enjoyed how you explained how convenient and beautiful God has created the tree.
Keep up the great work!
Katelyn : )
Talofa lava Aaliyah,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you wrote about the tree because it was as if the tree was a person. I really think that your writing is amazing.
Maybe some more adjectives would be helpful!
Mikaela
Good work Aaliyah. I like how you used rhetorical question then proceed to describe how the tree makes you feel about God. Keep it up. 👍
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