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The Cherry Blossom Trees hovered over me as I walked slowly down the damp concrete pathway. I was glad I wasn’t at home, home was chaotic and there were too many people there, fighting and arguing. I needed to get away, I needed to be alone.
I was walking down the endless petal filled pathway until I realised something. Cherry Blossom Trees were beautiful and made any space look alot better. I wish I had one at home, then maybe I’ll like to be there more often, looking after it to keep me away from the trouble.
Hi Aaliyah,i really like how you have put a lot of interesting vocabulary and Adjectives, i also like how you have explained the Blossom Tress in a lot of details. Keep up the great work!!
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